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Post by Aussie on Dec 3, 2006 8:20:50 GMT -5
ok, a tag story is where one person writes part of the story and other people pitch in and they write the story (like i write a snetence, then someone else does, thens omeone else does) win karma by participating
ill start:
Loren slid down the hill and out onto the ice, her little silver and white paws sliding everywhere
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Post by Chey on Dec 3, 2006 8:26:54 GMT -5
"Loren!" her babysitter, Jessie, cried, running down after her.
Loren barked playfully, then started whimpering when she realized how cold it was. She kept sliding... until, to Jessie's horror, the plopped right into the freezing cold water through a hole in the ice.
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Post by Aussie on Dec 3, 2006 8:30:07 GMT -5
"Loren!" Jessie cried. She bounded forward untill she was at the edge of the hole. she spotted the tiny puppy and lifted her through the hole. she started to run toward.................(continue)
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Post by Chey on Dec 3, 2006 8:34:44 GMT -5
...the cave at the bottom of the hill where they could make a fire and stay for the night; the hill may have been easy to get down, but it was very hard to get up between the ice and steepness, and those paired with the darkness at this time- well, they would have to wait until morning, when the sun's rays could melt the ice a little bit.
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Post by Aussie on Dec 3, 2006 10:52:41 GMT -5
jessie woke up to a little voice singing
"jingo bews, jingo bews, jingo aw da waaaaaaaaayyyyyy!" completely out of tune and the wrong words. jessie began to make breakfast, knowing bacon was lorens favorite.
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Post by Chey on Dec 3, 2006 10:59:18 GMT -5
"hey detty, wea mommy?" loren asked.
"at the top of the hill. we'll go back later today." she didnt want to worry loren, but everyone was probably really worried about them right now.
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Post by Aussie on Dec 3, 2006 11:15:03 GMT -5
"hey, hey, hey detty, gef wat?" loren kept jessie laughing 4 the rest of the time they were there.
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Post by Chey on Dec 3, 2006 13:22:40 GMT -5
"ok, loren, i think the ice has melted a little bit," Jessie said. "we can go see your mommy now!"
they started to climb up the hill and only a half hour later did they reach the top of the hill.
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Post by Aussie on Dec 7, 2006 15:28:22 GMT -5
"hey, wook! itth my home!" and with that she slid down the hill.
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Post by Chey on Dec 7, 2006 15:45:17 GMT -5
"Loren!" jessie cried. she was a little annoyed- they had spent so much time getting up the hill, and now she would have to go get loren and climb up again, and it would take twice as long because they were both tired. In fact, Loren was now asleep at the bottom of the hill.
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Post by Aussie on Dec 7, 2006 16:08:59 GMT -5
ummmmmmm...... slid down the hill on the other side, i meant.
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Post by Chey on Dec 7, 2006 20:14:18 GMT -5
i knew that  forget that last post lorens mom came running out. "what did you do to my baby?!?" she shouted at jessie angrily. |
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Post by Aussie on Dec 9, 2006 7:50:58 GMT -5
"im sorry! we went for a walk, and a huge snowstorm came...." jessie started
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Post by Chey on Dec 9, 2006 10:03:20 GMT -5
"i dont trust you with her anymore!" she barked angrily. "get off my land before i call the police!"
"but-"
"no! get away!" she started swiping at jessie with the broom in her hand. it hit her in the nose, and she ran away, whining.
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forget that last post